Tuesday, 20 September 2016

writing

This term in writing i have been learning to organise my ideas. We plan our storys's using see,hear,smell exc. My story is plan with those senses. They make it more descriptive.
Here it is.....













Evaluation: I think that I am ready to write more complicated story's





Feed back: I think you did good on doing your story.
            -Mayson
Feedforward: i think you need to re-read the description and fix some words up.


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