Sunday, 6 December 2015

Harriet's poetic writing

Description: In Troy's writing group we have been doing poetry. The kind of poetry we are doing are limericks, free verse and cinaquins. We only published our free verse and cinquains. A cinquains looks like a Christmas tree because you go  two words then four words and so on until you get back to two again. You can find them on the link below. 

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I love how you expressed what you thought about the spotted Lynx in your poem next time I think you could go into a bit more detail about seeing and touching the spotted Lynx while keeping the poem kind of short. Devin 

I think I did good describing the Lynx and it's features but next time I think that I could add where it lives and it's habitat.

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