Tuesday, 17 November 2015

Free verse poetry

We have been doing free verse poetry in Troys writing group
This is my writing




I touch and freeze.  
The fur is so soft. 
A low gentle growl sounds in ears.
It looks like a whole heap of spotted fur.
It smells like a lot of snow and dust.
I touch and freeze.
The mountain Lynx is powerful and kind.


Evaluation
I think I used smell, touch, see, and hear.

I didn't use any language features

I think next time I could use language features and make sure I focus.


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